帮帮忙纠错英语以下是一片英语短文,语法结构较为简单,可能存在不少错误,把短文的错误纠正过来,最好能把短文改得高级点（当然,最重要的是把错误改过来就好~呵呵~（题目希望能帮我翻译

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帮帮忙纠错英语
以下是一片英语短文,语法结构较为简单,可能存在不少错误,把短文的错误纠正过来,最好能把短文改得高级点（当然,最重要的是把错误改过来就好~呵呵~（题目希望能帮我翻译下,
生命的感动
——读《最后一片叶子》有感
After reading this wonderful story,I have some deep feelings.
The one is the importance of never giving up.If you give up,and then no one could help you.If you have a dream,why to be fear to catch it,why not to go after it,and why not to (投入）all what you could do to realize it?Remember,there is belief to win,there is hope.Never give up,and you will see the wonder.
Another is the kindness.The kindness that the old Behrman,a greatest artist in my heart showed,moves me.To save a girl,the old artist risking death to paint,just want to tell her:" Don't give up!" It's a universal love,and this love gives warm to our lives,to our friends,and to the whole world.

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Finishing this fine tear-jerker,I was touched and impressed by the messages the story conveying.
First of all,no matter what happen to you,never give up.If you loss your tiny hope,no one could help you.When you counter with a setback,the wise choice is to go along with your dream,your great dream,and to engage all yourself in realizing it.Remember that to continue to finish the way laid ahead for you,and you will meet the miracle waiting for you one day.
Meanwhile,the story also tells us that kindness is the angel in our life.The kind-hearted artist,Behrman,moves me deeply with his kind deed.To keep the girl alive,the old man took the risk of his own life to 'creat' a wonderful sight the girl anticipated.The only aim of his great effort was to deliver the brief of 'Don't give up' to the pity girl.What a unselfish love it is,this love warms everyone even on a freezing cold winter day!
In a word,it is well worth reading and it gives me an unforgetable li lesson about life!