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这是我英语演讲的稿子,
Hallo everyone!Today I want to talk about a television drama.
"We are not discarded,instead,we abandon them." "Now,is your mother on your side?"
They are advertising slogans of this television drama.
The name of this drama is"Tomorrow,Mother will not be here".It is a television drama currently airing on NipponTelevision (NTV).It follows the stories of ten children living in an orphanage .
The story is set in the Children’s Home.It told us what is to love and what is to be loved in terms of the children without parents.I think it is a very moving story,however,it is also educative.
As we know,children in some television drame can’t have a natural performance,they speak like recite.
But in "Tomorrow,Mother will not be here",although the protagonist is a group of children,they have a good performance.
Post is my favorite role.She looks very cool.In fact,she is a good girl and always thinks of others and never of self.
Let me show you a short video.
That's all.Thank you!
这是我自己写的,不知道会不会有什么语法错误或者表达不当的地方,希望大神能指导、修改一下!

Answer 1

Hello everyone!Today I would like to introduce a television drama.
"We are not discarded,instead,we abandon them." "Now,is your mother on your side?"
They are the advertising slogans of this television drama.
The name of this drama is"Tomorrow,Mother will not be here".It is a television drama currently airing on NipponTelevision (NTV).It presents the stories of ten children living in an orphanage .
The story is set in the Children’s Home.It told us how to love and what is to be loved in terms of the children without having parents.I think it is a very inspiring story,however,it is also educative.
As we know,children in some television drama can’t have a natural performance,they speak mechanically.
But in this programme,although the protagonist is a group of children,they have an outstanding performance.
Post is my favorite role.She looks very cool.In fact,she is a good girl and always thinks of others and never of herself.
Let me show you a short video.
That's all.Thank you!