"ExplorationoftheEffectiveApproachofQualityEducation"的thesis可以这样写吗?Thispapermainlystudytheimpactofqualityeducation,andkeepalong-termperspectivetolookatthechildren'seducationproblems,advancingwiththetimes,l

Question

"Exploration of the Effective Approach of Quality Education "的thesis 可以这样写吗?
This paper mainly study the impact of quality education,and keep a long-term perspective to look at the children's education problems,advancing with the times,let the children get to sustainable development.

Answer 1

整体角度是没有错的、
几个小小的语法修改一下、个人推荐、
比如keep a long-term perspective改成take、译为采用、
然后let要改一改、要么前面再加一个因果或并列连词、否则problems接let不通、