part2帮我修改以下我写的英文活动小流程的语法若有任何不通顺请帮我修改以下是我写的一个英文活动小流程请帮我修改不通顺语法不对的地方不是要翻译objectivity-thepurposeofthisact

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part 2 帮我修改以下我写的英文活动小流程的语法 若有任何不通顺 请帮我修改
以下是我写的一个英文活动小流程  请帮我修改不通顺 语法不对的地方 不是要翻译




objectivity

-  the purpose of this activity ,is to let children learn how to draw and learn how to use their own
imagination to create their own point of view,any idea about the world.
- also to help children to develop their physical development ,fine motor skills as well.


2.evaluation 
- after this activity,children will be able to use their imagination to create their own drawing.
- also they will learn how to organize different thing in different point of views as well.
- this activity is helping their fine motor skills 


3.procedure
1.brain storm,take few minutes to think about what you want to draw
2.once yoy got the ideas,draw it on the black paper
3.you may use your both hands to make the drawing blind,to make some different

Answer 1

Objective
-the purpose of this activity is to let children learn how to draw and use their own imagination to create their own point of view or any ideas about the world.
-help children to develop their physical development, 


2 Evaluation
- children will able to use their imagination to create their own drawing
- they would understand how to organize different ideas in different point of views
- this activity can help them to develop their motor skills


3 Procedure

take a few minutes to think about what do you want to draw (I think brainstorm is more like to think back)

once you get the ideas,draw them on the black paper.

you may use your both hands to make the drawing blind(what do you mean),be creative! 







Personal Suggestion
if you want to do bullet points,is not necessary to use transitional words between each points 
Also,I am not sure what do you try to do on Section


Please forgive me if I did something wrong.