英语翻译但是结果却不尽人意.竞争社KCB已经占据了原来我们想要进入的kids市场的70%份额.realcool公司利用adv的modification,实行了差别化战略,继续提高&市场占有率,同时开发了bikeking产品,进入

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英语翻译
但是结果却不尽人意.竞争社KCB已经占据了原来我们想要进入的kids市场的70%份额.real cool公司利用adv的 modification,实行了差别化战略,继续提高&市场占有率,同时开发了bike king产品,进入了racer市场.
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首先,一点建议：这么重要的东西,理当给奖赏分才能对得起专业翻译.而且,分拆让不同的人翻,不利于理解,水平可能不一,文体也不一致.当然,正确的中文也是正确理解和完美英文译文的基础.
But the result is unsatisfactory.Our competitor KCB has also taken 70% of the kids market that we intended to enter.Real Cool took advantage of the modification of ADV by implementing a differentiation strategy,which enabled it to continue to increase its market share while developing its Bike King products,breaking into the racer maker.