假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻谙根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求：1.描述漫画内容；2.发表个人感想注意：1.短文标题

Question

假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者 以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻 谙根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。

内容要求：

1.描述漫画内容；    2.发表个人感想

注意：

1. 短文标题与开头已给出 不计入总词数；

2. 考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯

3. 词数120左右;

4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇:告示牌sign

 

Answer 1

不唯一 Mind Your Behavior in Public Places Last Sunday I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What's worse they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No Littering" nearby. What a shame! Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.

分 析：
这是一篇以漫画形式的作文，注意漫画的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体 故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。
考点：
考查综合能力
点评：
一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。