写作（30分）今天我们班同学讨论了有关克隆的问题。同学们热烈发表了评论和表达了自己的看法；他们主要有两种不同的意见：支持反对人类可以利用克隆技术培养大量

Question

写作（30分）

今天我们班同学讨论了有关克隆的问题。同学们热烈发表了评论和表达了自己的看法；他们主要有两种不同的意见：

支持	反对
人类可以利用克隆技术培养大量品质优良的动植物	克隆会导致动物早衰、夭折
挽救珍奇濒危动物	无计划的克隆动物会破坏生态
调节大自然的生态平衡	导致一些疾病的传播
可以利用克隆技术找到解决人类各种疾病的方法。	邪恶分子可能克隆自己以达到他们的目的。
为失去孩子的夫妇克隆一个孩子	人们怕科学家会制造无数个同样的人

Answer 1

Our class had a heated discussion about whether cloning is good or bad. Different people have different ideas.Some students are in favour of it .They thinks that Cloning is beneficial to humans. It can make more profits for gardeners and farmers. Cloning can help save endangered animals. We can use Cloning to keep balance between humans and nature. We could use cloning to find a cure for illness that are presently incurable. Cloning can provide a copy of a child for a couple whose child has died.Others are against it. Animals clones make the Animals get ill easily and die young .Cloning is against nature. Animals clones may develop the illness of older animals and spread the illness. Some Evil people may want to clone themselves to attain their aims. People are afraid that scientists will create thousands of copies of the same person.

分 析：
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体 故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语in favour of支持；be against 反对；is beneficial to对。。有益；Cloning can help save endangered animals这个句子运用动名词做主语；We could use cloning to find a cure for illness that are presently incurable这个句子that引导illness的定语从句；People are afraid that scientists will create thousands of copies of the same person.这个句子that引导害怕的宾语从句；
考点：
提纲类作文