这句英语有错吗?要想不为这些东西所动心是很困难的.船上许多游客开始同商贩讨价还价起来,但我打定主意上岸之前什么也不买.Itisdifficulttoresisttheattractionofthegoods.Manytravellersonboardb

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这句英语有错吗?
要想不为这些东西所动心是很困难的.船上许多游客开始同商贩讨价还价起来,但我打定主意上岸之前什么也不买.
It is difficult to resist the attraction of the goods. Many travellers on board began to consult price of the goods with seller, but I did not plan to buy anything before I arrived land.
请别另外翻译,就这句英语分析,若有错请指出错哪了

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attraction改成attractions,最好是改成temptations；began to consult price of the goods with seller改成began to bargain with the sellers；did not plan to改成was determined not to或made up my mind not to...