英语语法问题Firstyouhavetogiveup.Firstyouhavetoknow,notfear,knowthatsomedayyou’regonnadie.It’sonlyafterwe’velosteverytingthatwe’refreetodoanyting.求指出这句话的全部错误,并告知我详细原因,具

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英语语法问题
First you have to give up.First you have to know,not fear,know that someday you’re gonna die.It’s only after we’ve lost everyting that we’re free to do anyting.
求指出这句话的全部错误,并告知我详细原因,具体错在哪里怎么改.后面的完全是中式英语,求纠正,越详细越好,主要是语法问题,在此拜谢!
求补充后面中式英语的具体语法，以及大致的帮我把这句话用正确的方法翻译出来。说实话我知道这完全是作死的节奏……不过我相信网友的力量是强大的，

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first you have to give up and to know that someday you're gonna die without fear.We're free to do anything just after we've lost everything.这是我修改后的句子,或许还是有错误的,我只能说我尽力了,希望对你有所帮助.