这是我写的英语作文,去年专接本的,老师发了作文模板我照着写了一下,感觉挺费劲的,请大家帮我改改PrivateCarsNowadaysmanypeoplepreperprivatecarsbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdaliylife.Generally,it

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这是我写的英语作文,去年专接本的,老师发了作文模板我照着写了一下,感觉挺费劲的,请大家帮我改改
Private Cars
Nowadays many people preper private cars because it has a significant role in our daliy life.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.First,the private cars can make it more convenient for people to work and and travel and make them enjoy their life better.Besides,the private cars have improved the quality of life and work efficiency.
But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that causing the traffic jams,To make matter worse,the increase of private cars have caused the environmental pollution.
Through the above analysis,I believe that positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.I would like to the people have private cars.

Answer 1

has-----------plays 较好
Generally-------Generally speaking 较好
改：
efficiency------efficiently ,work 这是动词,后面要用副词修饰,当然,为了对称,也可以改为：
the efficiency of work
to make matter worse----- to make the matter worse
have------has ,the increase of：增加……的危险,表示……的危险的时候,谓语动词用单数形式
I would like to the people have private cars.-----------I would like the people to have private cars.
would like=want ,适合 want sb to do sth,即是would like sb to do sth