我自己写的英语自我介绍!Halloeveryonne,i"amhappytointroducemyselftoyouMynameiszhiwei,i"mfiveteenyearsold.Iwasborninchina.MymothertongueisChinese.I"amgoodatEnglishandMath.Myfavoritesportsareplayingbasktballa

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我自己写的英语自我介绍!
Hallo everyonne ,i"am happy to introduce myself to you
My name is zhiwei,i"m fiveteen years old.I was born in china.My mother tongue is Chinese.I"am good at English and Math.My favorite sports are playing basktball and pingpong.By sports i can make many good friends.I"am outgoing so i like people around me.I fell very happy.But sometimes,i prefer to be quite,because i also like reading.There are 5 people in my family.My father is 46 years old,he have a oneself factory.My mother is 40 years old,she work in a restaurant.I have got two sister.The oldst sister is 20 years old and older sister is 18 years old.I have black hair,my hair is short and straight,i have a pair of brown eyes,i don"t have a beard.I have a oneself room,my room had a sofa,table,chairs cabinet.what“ more,i have got a oneself computer.
可能挺多错误的地方,

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I'm fiveteen改为I'm fifteen.By sports I can make改为Through sports/By taking part in sports I can make...I'm outgoing so I like people around me.改为：I'm outgoing so I like the people around me.I fel...