英语作文批改,请指出语法以及句型错误,还有是否偏题,大学英语4级考试1,目前有不少大学请明星当客座教授2,对这一现象,人们·看法不同3,我的看法HiringcelebritiesasvisitingprofessorsDuringtheseday

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英语作文批改,请指出语法以及句型错误,还有是否偏题,
大学英语4级考试
1,目前有不少大学请明星当客座教授
2,对这一现象,人们·看法不同
3,我的看法
Hiring celebrities as visiting professors
During these days,There are so many universities which invite hiring celebrities as visiting professors.As a highest educational institution of china,This phenomenon has caused much attentions from society.
Some people say hiring celebrities are the people who are liked by students.If universities add this kind of activities ,There is no doubt universities will be a place
which is more closed to students life.But others disagreed,They argued our students should learn knowledge from universities,Not how beautiful we are able to be.
As a university student,I think inviting hiring celebrities as visiting professors maybe a better way,But we also change a litter,Maybe we should pay attention to the difficulties which hiring celebrities meet and there own way to success.If we do like this,Both sudents and adults will be satisfied.

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　　During these days, there are so many universities which invite hiring celebrities as visiting professors. 【点评】 ...