帮忙看看语法已经用法谢谢Everytime,myfriendsandIchattedabouthighschoollife,thememoriesofthenhauntedme.Icanstillrememberitsbeautifulcampus,perfectfacilities,theredteachingbuildings,andourdormbuildingclearly.Mycl

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帮忙看看语法已经用法谢谢
Every time,my friends and I chatted about high school life,the memories of then haunted me.I can still remember its beautiful campus,perfect facilities,the red teaching buildings,and our dorm building clearly.My classmates and I always would like to compare our school to a jail,to an army camp,even to a hell.There are many things others couldn’t image.For example,we had a military management system.“All students should wake up 5:50 in the morning; then gather on ground for doing exercise 6:15.The first class starts at 7o’clock and the last class end at 10:50p.m.And students have P.E.class only twice a week.” Can you believe we followed this system almost 3 years?School regulations strictly forbid students having love affairs.There was no television,no cell phone,or I can say there is nothing for entertainment; let alone we had extremely heavy study works.However,I have to confess that I learned a lot during this period of life.For instance,through 3years’ military management I can regulate myself much tougher than before.And I gained a plenty of knowledge which helped me to be admitted to a famous university in Japan.I hated my high school before,but now I feel grateful to it.

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第一行里then 最好是换成which,第三行的would like to 最好删掉,不然读起来不顺,直接把compare改成compared,第四行第二个to 删掉比较好,there are many things others couldn/t image,这一句中把others 改成which pe...