如有不足之处,请大家尽量提出来,我英语语法不好,应该有不少错误...DueAttentionshouldBeGiventothestudyofChinaAlongwiththeadvanceofsocietyagrowingnumberofproblemsarebroughttoourattention,oneofwhichist

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如有不足之处,请大家尽量提出来,我英语语法不好,应该有不少错误...
Due Attention should Be Given to the study of China
Along with the advance of society a growing number of problems are brought to our attention,one of which is that a large number of students pay little attention to the studying of Chinese.
Why should this phenomenon take place?There are generally two factors accounting for it.First,with the increasingly rapid development of economic globalization,English is indispensable to our day-to-day life.Accordingly,a great of students spend much more time on English than Chinese.Second,Chinese is our mother tongue,everyone can speak it friendly.This is where ignoring the learning of Chinese comes in.
Therefore,wrong using of characters can be found not only in the newspapers,but also in the computers when we surfing the Internet,and to some degree,the Chinese traditional cultures seem to be in gradual retreat.
As far as I am concerned,from what has been analysed above,it is high time that some applicable approaches should be implemented by the government and universities to improve our Chinese standard.In addition,each of us should improve our awareness of studying Chinese.

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