英语翻译在当今信息技术高速发展的时代,每一个行业都融入到了这个时代中,它们已由传统的发展模式转变到符合自己的信息化发展模式,信息技术的发展使得全世界每一个位置都能随时随地

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在当今信息技术高速发展的时代,每一个行业都融入到了这个时代中,它们已由传统的发展模式转变到符合自己的信息化发展模式,信息技术的发展使得全世界每一个位置都能随时随地和其它位置对话,对于企业来讲,这将是非常大的竞争手段和发展路径,对于社会不断信息化的情况来讲这也是企业现在至未来合理的发展趋势,电子商务在企业的发展中占的比例也越来越大,企业要想在现在和以后的竞争中得到发展,传统上就要做好加强内部管理,提高运营效率,减少运营成本,不断地进行改进自己的经营模式,扩展自己的市场,而电子商务将会是主要的发展手段,做好了电子商务这一块,企业的客户将会是全世界的不同国家不同行业的人,而客户就是企事业发展的核心力量.可以说,在信息化时代下没有去发展电子商务的企业必将在不断的竞争中被淘汰

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Today,in the 21st century,with the great development of internet,information technology has already come into wide use in almost every industry.At the same time,to adjust themselves to the change of information technology,the traditional industries are also reforming themselves gradually.With the help of internet and other information technologies,firms can now establish business relationships with any perspective partner in the world.As for firms,with the popularization of information technology,e-business is not only a competitive advantage but also a business type,
If a firm wants to develop itself in fierce competition,they,traditionally,enforce its management,be effective,reduce cost and improve ist marketing method to achieve more market share.But now,due to the development of e-business,it can establish business relationships with people from vary industries and countries.As we all know,customer is core competence to develop business.So we can draw a conclusion,these companies,today,who deny to e-business will fail in the competition.
你写的这些汉语需要再推敲!有些从逻辑上不通,而有些观点,从我个人的角度来讲,不敢苟同.