帮助修改一篇初二英语作文HOWTOSUCCEED,十点之前望可以修改完毕!Everyonewantstosucceed.SodoI.Buttherearealotofdifficultiesonthewaytosucceedandstopusfrombeingsucceed.So,howcanwedo?Therearesomeadviceto

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帮助修改一篇初二英语作文HOW TO SUCCEED,十点之前望可以修改完毕!
Everyone wants to succeed.So do I.But there are a lot of difficulties on the way to succeed and stop us from being succeed.So,how can we do?There are some advice to you.
First,you should set a goal.Because a gole can make you konw what should you do and let you go towards to success all the time.Second,you must make a plan for you a goal.This is a key to success.Due to the fact that,a plan will let you understand the next set clearly.And then,you will near to the success.Third,you have to have a never-give-up attitude.Like this,you will be succeed nearly.Because,all of everything's result come from everybody's attitude.
These are all my suggestions.I think if you do things like these,you will be succeed in the future.At last ,beliebe in yourself.Beacuse there is a saying:"There is a will,there is a way"
希望高手可以帮我认真修改,耽误之际是看看看语法有没有误!必须在十点之前,
还有,最后一句谚语我们老师说是“there is a will,there is a way”有志者事竟成
但是我看网上的都是“Where There Is a Will There Is a Way “,写哪一个?

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第二段：
第一行 gole-goal, konw-know, what should you do- what you should do
第二行 第二个单词to 去掉 for you a goal - for your goal
第三行 next set- next step
第四行 第一个单词 to去掉 倒数第二个单词 be去掉
第五行 逗号去掉 all of 去掉 come- comes
第三段： be去掉 beliebe-believe
Where there is a will there is a way