英语高手来帮我纠正一下我写的自我介绍吧,肯定有语法错误,希望改正,Goodmorning.It'sapleasureformetobehereinfrontofyoutopresentmyself.MynameisHanshasha,IwillgraduatefromthePeoples'FriendshipUniversityo

Question

英语高手来帮我纠正一下我写的自我介绍吧,肯定有语法错误,希望改正,
Good morning.It's a pleasure for me to be here infront of you to present myself.My name is Hanshasha,I will graduate from the Peoples' FriendshipUniversity of Russia In next july.After nearly 8 years life and study inRussia.Now,I speak in Russia better than in english.It can be said,now you hear Ispeak English was recently exercises.I think this interview for me is aprocess of improvement and very cherish this opportunity to interview.I am anhonest,self-motivated,sincere,enthusiastic girl,My weakness istoo outspoken,sometimes confident overdone.I do not have any long-term workexperience,I hope to join your company and improve themselves,I hope when Icomplete the task for the company ,While achieving self-worth.I am a masterof international marketing ,although no work experience,but I will studyhard,serious work,doubling contribute for the company.

Answer 1

Good morning.It's a pleasure for me to present myself to you all.My name is Hanshasha,I will graduate from the Peoples' Friendship University of Russia next july.Having lived and studied here for nearly eight years,I can speak Russian better than English.I must tell you the truth that I can manage to talk in English is due to my recent practice in English.I believe this interview for me is a process of improvement and I cherish this opportunity very much.I am an honest,self-motivated person.I am always sincere and enthusiastic to my colleague and my career.AlthoughI do not have any long-term work experience,I hope my talent and my knowledge learnt in Russia can qualify me to be a memer staff of your company.I hope I will be able to make my contribution to the company.
It is enough,don't make over positive comments about yourself.Don't say you want to learn in the company even you have to go through such a process.
Good luck to you.You will get what you want if you can talk confidently.