英语的小事情大家帮我看看这篇文章写的哪里错了?为什么错?该怎么修改!摆脱大家了!我初一不要修改得我看不懂DEARbettywouldyoulikegotothecinemawithmeforwatchfilm!thefilm"snameisblacksepember

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英语的小事情
大家帮我看看这篇文章写的哪里错了?为什么错?该怎么修改!摆脱大家了!我初一不要修改得我看不懂
DEAR betty
would you like go to the cinema with me for watch film!the film"s name is black sepember .black sepember is on in the afternoon and evenning on sunday! on sunday,you go to the chunming cinema

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what do you want to go to the cinema on sunday! the film is black sepetnber !in the afternoon and evenning !at chunming cinema!I think of great idea !what do you think?

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would like的用法是would like to do,所以原句would you like go to 应改为would you like to go to.for watch 应该为to watch,to表示目的.the film"s name 改为called black september比较地道电影上演应是:will sh...