有一封信要写给外国明星的,DearXXXIt'smypleasuretotellyoumylove.Iappreicatethecharacteryouhaveportrayedineverycinema.AndI'myourfans.IlovestuckwithyousincethebeginningandeventhenIpromisedI'dneverletgo.Asa

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有一封信要写给外国明星的,
DearXXX
It's my pleasure to tell you my love.I appreicate the character you have portrayed in every cinema.And I'm your fans.I love stuck with you since the beginning and even then I promised I'd never let go.As a general,you're so messing about,handsomely about in Hollywood.When I saw you on the screen for the very first time,I was intoxicated by your eyes!They're so beautiful.I'm obssessed with you.So I'll never let anyone take you away or break you.I can't make you my own definition of perfection,because you're perfect no matter what you do.
It may hurt me inside that you're getting older and you'll only keep getting older.But you'll never cease to amaze me with anything you do.You'll always be in my heart.So never lost your gorgeous smile please.It's the reason why I wake up everyday.Never change who you used to be,who you are and who you aspire to be.Although against all adds,I'll always love you and I promise to stay with you as long as you stay with the world!
Finally,I have one small wish.Can you give me your signature,I really want to get it but I don't have your photograph.I hope you can help me.If I get it I will mount it upon the wall of my bedroom.You can believe that I love you forever!
Yours Sincerely,Liu Yufei

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I am a big fan of yours.And I am so happy to tell you how much I admire you.I appreciate all the character you have ever played.The moment I saw your beautiful eyes,I was fully attracted by that.In my eyes,you are the perfect one I've ever know .I loved you since the very beginning and I will always stand by you.
前面这样比较好,西方人比较注重逻辑,你是从中文直译过来他们可能理解不了.建议第二段不要提到他变老这种事,很没有意义并且他们不这样认为并且不喜欢别人这样说.