求英语大神帮我修改下作文‍IhavebeenlookingforwardtovisitingBeijing,IalwayswantedtogotoBeijingtovisittheImperialPalace,theGreatWallandsoon,mydreamcametrueinthesummer.it'sareallywonderfulexperienc

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求英语大神帮我修改下作文
‍I have been looking forward to visiting Beijing, I always wanted to go to Beijing to visit the Imperial Palace, the Great Wall and so on , my dream came true in the summer. it's a really wonderful experience traveling in Beijing.So please allow me to introduce Beijing.I took a flight to Beijing with my parents, Beijing city has a large population, and the subway is badly crowded,however,we are still excited. First, we went to the Imperial Palace, the Imperial Palace is beautiful as well as grand. The ancient emperors must have been very pleaed with the lives here which were comfortable enough, we took a lot of photos with my parents, and then we went to the Great Wall, the Great Wall is not big, It’s huge., What’s more, we ate lunch in the Great Wall, such as Beijing roast duck, rice and other delicious foods, Beijing roast duck is very delicious, my mom and dad like Beijing roast duck very much. And we went to Tiananmen square, The Tiananmen is very grand, In the evening, we went to Wangfujing street, with many people on the street, and the goods that are very expensive, but we all like it, we also ate Beijing snacks that is tasty. And the end, we entered to the hotel, we feel very tired, we slept early.I was very happy, I learned a lot of things, And it's my first time to take a plane, I hope you can also visit the Chinese capital, Beijing. I believe you will be surprised.

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‍I often dreamt of visiting Beijing. I wanted to go to see the Imperial Palace, the Great Wall and other places of interest. My dream came true this summer. It's really a wonderful traveling experience. So please allow me to introduce my traveling experience in detail. I took a flight to Beijing with my parents. Beijing city has a large population, so the subway is badly crowded. However,we felt very much excited standing in the crowd. First, we went to the Imperial Palace, which was quite beautiful and grand. The ancient emperors must have been very pleased living there. The bedrooms and living rooms seem fairly delicate and comfortable. We took a lot of photos, and then went to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is not just big. It's huge. What’s more, we had lunch near the Great Wall. This time we had a chance to taste the real Beijing Food, such as Beijing roast duck, rice and other delicious foods. Beijing roast duck is very delicious. My mom and dad like Beijing roast duck very much. And we went to Tiananmen square, The Tiananmen is very spectacular. In the evening, we went to Wangfujing street. There were many people on the street. The goods there were very expensive, but we all liked them. We also ate Beijing snacks, which were tasty indeed. In the end, we entered the hotel, feeling very tired. So we slept early. I felt very happy about the trip beause I have learned a lot of things. And it's my first time to take a plane. I hope you can also visit our capital, Beijing. I believe you will be surprised and thrilled.