”上大学无用论“请大家能否帮我看一下有哪些语法的问题,Intoday'ssociety,collegestudentsisbecomingmorecommon,accordingtotheChinastatisticalyearbook2012,bytheendof2012,thenumberof25.365647millionstudentsin

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”上大学无用论“请大家能否帮我看一下有哪些语法的问题,
In today's society,college students is becoming more common,according to the China statistical yearbook 2012,by the end of 2012,the number of 25.365647 million students in common colleges and universities.According to the 09 enrollment record,the number of 2014 will be a lot higher than in 2012.
So there are many parents think children to college is a waste of money,as the father,think it no use his daughter read university,as well as when we are young,played out belongs to own a piece of day,might be promising in the university.But also some people in society think the father is right,they believe that society is a very good university,so the father's determination to more determined.
But there are a lot of people think that children should read more books,in The Times of knowledge,read more books is good,but also can be in school you learn a lot of society,because the university is a small society.Can exercise their own various aspects ability,after entering the big society can be handy.
And I think,the university still depends on the individual,in the university,if you don't work hard,reading is also useless.But if you make full use of the university to provide all the resources,fully exercise myself,there must be some kind of as last.

Answer 1

1,college students is becoming more common
这里改成it's more common for people to go to college.你的是典型的中式英文.
2,the number of 25.365647 million students in common colleges and universities.
这里应该改成The number of students stay in common colleges and universities is 25.365647 million.你的原句语法上和语义上都说不通.
3,the number of 2014 will be a lot higher than in 2012
这里higher改成larger比较好,数字是不存在高低问题的,只有大小问题,high的意思是高的.
4,So there are many parents think children to college is a waste of money
think 前加who,不然你的主语有两个谓语动词；children后面加going,不然你的宾语从句里主语有问题.改成So there are many parents who think children going to college is a waste of money.这样一句话里有定语从句又有宾语从句,老师会觉得你英文很好.
从as the father 开始后面的语法和句意上读不通,建议你自己读下修改后再贴出来我帮你改.