假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语法错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语法错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My brother whom is a Harvard graduate work in a multinational company. Recently the company has failed several time in its attempts to break into the Chinese market. As a new manager in the charge of the sales department he is trying every possible means to promote the products of his company. Because he has taken some effective measures the profits are expected to rise at 30%. I am real proud of my brother. What’s more she has promised to give me five thousand yuan while my summer holiday comes. If so I will be able to afford go traveling. How a wonderful piece of news!

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