假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;   2. 只允许修改10处 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My father who is already in his fifties live in the countryside. Despite the fact that his school time adds up to only one year he knows that knowledge is great importance to young people as a result of which he always encourages me to study hard. To ensure that I can focus on my study my father does whichever he can do for him. Once he was bad ill and the doctor asked him to stay in the bed for several days. When I got home to see him I found him worked in the fields. Such deeply moved was I that I couldn’t help bursting into tear. This is my father a simple honest or hardworking person.

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My father who is already in his fifties live in the countryside. Despite the fact that his

lives

school time adds up to only one year he knows that knowledge is ∧ great importance to

young people as a result of which he always encourages me to study hard. To ensure that I can focus on my study my father does whichever he can do for him. Once he was

bad ill and the

                            whatever             me            badly    

doctor asked him to stay  in   the bed for several days. When I got home to see him I found him worked in the fields. Such deeply moved was I that I couldn’t help bursting into tear. This is

working     So                                      tears

my father a simple honest or hardworking person.

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