假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。         修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；     2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

According to a recent survey about 70 percents of the working people is considered to be

 “sub-healthy” because most people are not leading a healthy life nowadays? But how must we

lead a healthy life? Firstly we should mind our diet by eat more fruits and vegetables and

avoiding too much sweets and food that contains a lot of fat. In an addition we should exercise

every day to build upon a strong body. Finally we should try to happy every day and forget that

troubles us because people who are usual happy have healthy bodies.

Answer 1

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