短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在

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短文改错
      假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文
中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Brad,
      I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school. I feel uneasily recently. At
home I feel like prisoner. I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet. The
only thing I have to do it is studying. Every time I got a low mark, my parents will
scold me sharply. There’s a generation gap among my parents and me, but it’s
always difficult to communicate. Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful,
isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a
good university？I am very unhappy and lost. I need your help.
                                                                                               Best wishes,
                                                                                                    Li Ping

Answer 1

Dear Brad,
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school. I feel uneasily recently. At
                                 1. grade                                        2.  uneasy
home I feel like∧prisoner. I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet. The
                       3. a
only thing I have to do it is studying. Every time I got a low mark, my parents will
                             4. 去掉                                 5. get
scold me sharply. There’s a generation gap among my parents and me, but it’s
                                                                 6. between                    7. so/and
always difficult to communicate. Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful,
                                                        8. is
isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a
          9. Why                                                                                       10.  enter
good university? I am very unhappy and lost. I need your help.
                                         Best wishes,
                                           Li Ping