英语高手请帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误吗,或者有表达错误,用词不当等等,请一一指出谢谢justnowmymothersentmeamessagethatmyfamilyhasgonetomygrandma'shousetoenjoythemid-autumnday.andiwoundn'

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英语高手请帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误吗,或者有表达错误,用词不当等等,请一一指出谢谢
just now my mother sent me a message that my family has gone to my grandma's house to enjoy the mid-autumn day.and i woundn't go because it is too far away .so i will enjoy it myself or with my friends.my friend said he has sent aome mooncakes to me .but i haven't received yet.where and how will i enjoy the day.i am hoping its coming.i remembered the year befor last year,i spent the day with my best friend D of colledge.we went out and talked about our feelings and some interesting things.that's a good feeling .i will remember that forever.i cherish the memory of the day in my home.and i cherish the smell of mooncakes in the fridge.it is a different kind of taste.and it be feeled only in your family.that tastes mixed with the favour of family and love.but this time i can't enjoy it ,because i don't have a fridge.and just now i watched my show.and it said that they will have autumn programs on sunday.i like shanghai tv.and i think many stars from my show will come to the program.and i think i will enjoy it .for that it is my favourite program.and maybe i can watch it with eating the mooncakes.it is funny.happy mid-autumn's day.my ralatives,my friends and my catty.

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message that - message saying that
has gone - had gone
enjoy the mid-autumn day - spend Mid-Autumn Festival
wouldn't go - didn't (want to) go
enjoy it myself - spend it by myself
has sent - had sent
received yet - received them yet
where and how will i enjoy the day.i am hoping its coming. - Wherever and however I'm going to spend it, I'm still looking forward to the festival.
remembered - remember
my best friend D of colledge - my best friend from college, D
memory - memories
the day in my home ?
it be feeled only in your family - it can only be felt in a family
tastes mixed - taste is mixed
favour of family ?
can't enjoy - won't be able to enjoy
watched - was watching
will - would
my show ?
autumn porgrams ?
shanghai tv - the TV shows in Shanghai
many stars from my show will come to the program ?
with eating the mooncakes - while eating mooncakes
ia funny - will be fun
mid-autumn day - Mid-Autumn Festival
catty ?