短文改错ThefirsttimeIwenttoswimwasaboutnineyearsago.ManyfriendsofmecouldswimandoftenlaughtedatmebecauseIcouldn't.SoIdecidedtolearntoswimaswellastheyswam.Oneafternooninthesummer,theweatherwaspleased.Ithou

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The first time I went to swim was about nine years ago.Many friends of me could swim and often laughted at me because I couldn't.So I decided to learn to swim as well as they swam.One afternoon in the summer,the weather was pleased.I thought it was really good for swim.Thus I came to the swimming pool,not knowing what to do.Just as I wondering,I felt someone give me a pushand I dropped into the pool.Frightening in the water,I couldn't help to crying,"Help,help!".And I heard some laughter from the opposite side.I managed to keep myself balanced,only to find the water was just a little above my knee.

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The first time I went to swim was about nine years ago. Many friends of (mine) could swim and often laughed at me because I couldn't. So I decided to learn to swim as well as they (did). One afternoon in (去掉the) summer, the weather was (pleasant). I thought it was really good for (swimming). Thus I (went) to the swimming pool, not knowing what to do. Just as I (加入was) wondering, I felt someone give me a push and I dropped into the pool. (Frightened) in the water, I couldn't help (去掉to) crying, "Help, help!". And I heard some laughter from the opposite side. I managed to keep myself balanced, only to find the water was just a little above my (knees).