写了一个英文课程小计画请帮我修正语法>

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写了一个英文课程小计画请帮我修正语法 ><
以下请帮我修正 看我写的对不对行不行
Objectives:the purpose of this activity is to let children get better understanding themselves,and to know other classmate as well.Also in order to increase their languageskills as well as a way to encourage quieter children to talk.
Activities:Allabout the picture / All about you
Materials needed:a baby picture / crayons or markers / paper
What to do :1.Send a letter to parents before this activity,inform to parents about thisactivity,ask them to prepare a baby picture for their children.
2.Now,its children’ term,ask the children to glue their baby pictureon the paper.
3.Ask the children to draw somethingabout him/her and let them color whatever they want.
4.When every child is done,ask them to present it in front of the class,and tell everybody about his/herpicture and drawing about.
Evaluation:It’s a good experience for me to plan this activity for children believechildren will learn more about each other,so they can able to make friend witheach other,this activity make their social life get better.i believe there issomething I need to keep going,in order to create more good activities for childrento have fun in their life.

Answer 1

the purpose of this activity is to let children get better understanding of themselves

,and to know other classmates as well
inform of parents about thisactivity
children’s turn
this activity for children ,and I believe that children will learn more about each other,
they can be able 
make friends
基本不错,汉语思维太重.感觉总是没写完,句子语序太过汉语化