短文改错一篇oneday,ablindmanwassittingonstreetwithasignbyhisfeetthatread:Iamblind,pleasehelpme.Agentlemanwalkedthroughandstoppedtohavealookatthesign,noticedonlyafewcoininthemen'shat.Hetookoutsomeb

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短文改错一篇
one day ,a blind man was sitting on street with a sign by his feet that read :I am blind ,please help me.A gentleman walked through and stopped to have a look at the sign ,noticed only a few coin in the men's hat .He took out some bills from his wallet and put it into the hat .And then he turned the sign over again .Wrote a new message and left .Several hours later ,the genleman returned .To his happy ,he found the hat almost full of bills and coins.He didn't expect that the new message does work,which read:It's spring now,and i can not see it

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第1排：sitting on the street
第2排：walked by; noticed改成noticing; coin加s
第3排：men's 改成man's；it改成them
第4排：again去掉
第5排：happy改成happiness；does改成did
最后一排：and改成but
楼上那个the hat almost——the hat was almost 这个was不加也是对的,不用改.
第三排那个因为前面是 bills 复数,所以要 it改them