请帮我看看下面的一段英文有语法错误没,如有帮我修改下,Ioftengototherestaurantnearmyhomewithmyseveralbestfriendswhohavesameinterestwithme.Intherestaurant,therearealotofdeliciousfood,likepizza,icecrea

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请帮我看看下面的一段英文有语法错误没,如有帮我修改下,
I often go to the restaurant near my home with my several best friends who have same interest with me.In the restaurant,there are a lot of delicious food,like pizza,ice cream,and fish.
In addition,music is another reason attracts me go there.In that place we can listen to different kinds of music,such as rock and roll,jazz.Staying with my friends and we are talking about new movies,and all funny things in a week.That is most wonderful moment in my daily life.Of course,that place provide people a cozy atmosphere for releasing much pressure from work and study.

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with some of my best friends
who share the same interest with me
such as pizza.
music is another reasons which attracts
I love staying with my friends and we enjoy talking about new movies and all funny things happened during the week
That is the most wonderful moment in my daily life(但是你前面说一个星期里的趣事,但是如果这里说daily life,意思就是你每天都会来这里,那就不是一个星期里的趣事了)
That place provides.for releasing pressures from work and study
其实有些也不能说是错,只是也许这样说会好一些
希望楼主找到自己喜欢的表达方式