英语作文修改,mywintervacationnothingisdifferentonmywintervacation.inordertofinishhomework,isavedmyplay-time.soigotupearlyforoneweekinarow.ifelttiredandstarthelpingmymotherdosomehousework.itmademerelaxed.i

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英语作文修改,
my winter vacation
nothing is different on my winter vacation.in order to finish homework,i saved my play-time.so i got up early for one week in a row.i felt tired and start helping my mother do some housework.it made me relaxed.i usually do some same things in different days."i will be bored".i though.but i could not find anything is interesting.
how time flies!i enjoyed my spring festival.sure,i have gotten lucky money and visit_(亲朋好友)______
请各位英语高手帮我填下空中的词并帮忙想个好的结尾!如果发现有错的请帮我修改,句子用得不好的请帮忙用好的句子代替,

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统一用过去时态
nothing was（过去时态） different on my winter vacation.in order to finish my（最好加my） homework,i gave up(放弃了我的游戏时间) my play-time and(承接) i got up early for one week in a row(这里in a row是不是多余的?没有确切的意思).i felt tired and started（过去时） to(start to do...) help my mother do some housework.and(衔接) it made me relaxed.i wanted to do something different otherwise I will bored(我知道你想表达什么意思,这样说顺畅一点),but i could not find anything（is 是多余的） interesting.
how time flies!i enjoyed my spring festival.surely（副词）,i have got bribery money(我知道你想说红包)and visited a lot of relatives and friends.I felt very happy for my winter vacation.