找语法错误，一个给10分Computersarewidelyusedineducation，andsomepeoplethinkteachersdonotplayanyimportantrolesintheclassroom.Towhatextentdoyouagree?Nowaday,alongwiththeboomingofcomputerscience，publicfocusth

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找语法错误，一个给10分
Computers are widely used in education，and some people think teachers do not play any important roles in the classroom. To what extent do you agree?
Nowaday,along with the booming of computer science，public focus their attention on education again.Accordingly,the toppic of whether teachers can be replaced by computer is being debated by more and more people,who hold widely diverse ideas and take totally different attitude.Personally, the status of teacher is indisputable,which is base on educational and mental aspects.
According to experts' views,they believe that the shortage of machine is that they can't educated students according to their different abilities，in spite of they can display many media effects which teachers can't do by the right of advanced technology.However,mending project with the feedback from students'emotions is one of the most apparently advantages of expericial teachers.Besides this,tutors can provide extra study to students repectively after school,which can enhance their studing competition.
More ever,psychology also is an important aspect of school teaching.Consequently,regarding students mental healty is teachers'another benefit we can't ignored.Obviously,it's commonly accepted that teachers can do it much better than actificial machines.If computers displace teachers teaching kids in classrooms,which will cause kids have less time to communicate with the elders.As a result,they will become more isolated ,even suffered from serious mental disease.
In summary,when we rethink this issue and what have been discussed above,it's rational for us to believe that teachers have indispensable impact on students.We can't emphasize the significance of educators too much.
语法上的结构上的 内容上的 逻辑上的 形式上的，任何有道理的错误都可以提，每个给10分 谢谢啦。在线等。。。。。。

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Nowaday,along with the booming of computer science，public focus their attention on education again
中的public 改成the public或者public people
第一段第二行的topic写错了。
第一段倒数第二句的attitude应该改成复数。
第一段中Personally, the status of teacher is indisputable,which is base on educational and mental aspects.
最好改为
Personally, the status of teacher is indisputable,a conclusion which is base on educational and mental aspects.
第二段中
the shortage of machine is that they can't educated students according to their different abilities中的shortage是缺乏短缺的意思，你要表示缺点可以用disadvantage,defect,deficiency,shortcoming等等。另外你写the shortage of machine,后面有说they cannot educated students，首先前面machine应该加s, 否则后面就不应该用they,两者要一致，另外cannot不能缩写，还有是cannot educate不是educated.
后面的in spite of 后面只能加名词，不能加句子。你可以用although, even though或者是in spite of the fact that.....
by the right of advanced technology是什么意思？
mending project with the feedback不好，改成improving the teaching level by the feedback,后面那个apparently改成apparent
expericial是虾米意思？没这个词。要表示有经验的用experienced.
repectively写错了，应该是respectively.
enhance their studing competition,没有这种用法，可以写enhance their academic ability.
第三段more over 连着写。
students mental healty 改成students' mental health
teachers'another benefit, 不是老师的好处，这句话不对，应该是老师的优势。改成teachers' another advantage/virtue/merit.
we can't ignored,can后面用原型啊。
If computers displace teachers teaching kids in classrooms,which will cause kids have less time to communicate with the elders.整体错误，这句话没有主谓宾。if引导的状语从句后面有接一个定语从句，没有主干，应该改成If computers displace teachers teaching kids in classroom,kids will have less time to communicate with the elders.
even suffered from serious mental disease改成suffering.句型是sb suffers sth.
最后一句We can't emphasize the significance of educators too much.
用法不地道。应该这么用 the significance of educators cannot be overemphasized.
回答完毕。