英语作文挑一下其中的错误上网的利弊IthinkitisnotallbadformilldeschoolstudenttosearchtheInternet.Somestudentsplaygamesonline.Idon'tagreeitatall.Ithasnothingtodowiththeirstudy.Anditwillmakethemlose

Question

英语作文 挑一下其中的错误
上网的利弊
I think it is not all bad for millde school student to search the Internet.Some students play games on line.I don't agree it at all.It has nothing to do with their study.And it will make them lose the interests of learning.But also it is very nessary for us to search the Internet.In the modern world,using computer and the Internet is an important skill.We can use it to find some information that we need and communicate with our friends,teachers and parents.Sending e-mail and check out some international news are useful for us as well.
上网的利弊
我觉得中学学生到网上搜索一些学习资料它并不都是坏的，玩游戏我就不同意了。这与他们的学习毫无益处.并且它将让他们失去了兴趣学习，但它也很有关我们的互联网搜索在现代世界中,利用电脑和因特网是一项很重要的技能我们可以用它来找到一些信息,我们需要和与自己的朋友交流,老师和家长发送电子邮件和一些国际新闻是有用的对我们也一样。
说一下具体怎么改，尽量用一些简单的单词，意思不差不多就行了

Answer 1

许多语法错误和表达不够地道,我帮你改过去了.当时我尽量没有改变你的句型,你看行吗?
I don't think it is absolutely bad for millde school students to search the Internet.But if some students play games on line,i will not agree with it at all,because it does not do any good to their study,and it will make them lose the interest in study.However,it is nessary for us to search the Internet.In the modern world,using computer and the Internet is an important skill.We can use it to find some information that we need and communicate with our friends,teachers and parents.Sending e-mail and searching for some international news are useful for us as well.