有没有什么错误,如果高一的水准这篇作文能得多少分,满分25I’msurePeterareourgoodteachers,goodfriendship.ThoughheisstrictwithourinEnglishfinishthehomeworkontime.Wearestillremberyourwarmsmile.Whenwe

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有没有什么错误,如果高一的水准这篇作文能得多少分,满分25
I’m sure Peter are our good teachers ,good friendship .Though he is strict with our in English finish the homework on time .We are still rember your warm smile .
When we learn encounter difficults ,he helped us on her own initiative ,speak very careful aim is to make us understand .
What has impressed up most is that he has a strange way to make his lessons intersting .we don’t think we’ll be bored in Peter’s class ,because he often tell us so many interesting happen in his country wchich attract us so much .
MR.Peter is such a good teacher that we all willing to study hard to repay his kindness!

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I’m sure Peter is our good teacher,good friend.Though he is strict with us in English and requires us to finish the homework on time.We all remember your warm smile .
When we encountered difficulties during learning,he helped us with his own initiatives,spoke very carefully.His aim is to make us understand .
What has impressed us most is that he has a strange way to make his lessons interesting.We don’t think we’ll feel bored in Peter’s class because he often tells us so many interesting things in his country which attracted our interest so much .
Mr.Peter is such a good teacher that we are all willing to study hard to repay his kindness!