哪位大虾帮我看下这道英语改错在下感激涕零Everytimeisawsomeoneswimminggood,iwasveryjealous.Thissummer,becauseofmybestfriend,Tommyconsideredlearninghowtoswim,Idecidedtogowithouthim.Therefore,wesignedupt

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哪位大虾帮我看下这道英语改错 在下感激涕零
Every time i saw someone swimming good ,i was very jealous.
This summer ,because of my best friend ,Tommy
considered learning how to swim ,I decided to go without him.
Therefore,we signed up to attend the morning course.
On frist day,Tommy and i got up earlyto go to the swimming pool.
The instructor told us to warm it up ,and then tanght us how
to breathe properly .Before that,he showed us the freestyle step by step.Tommy and i.
couldnt wait to get wet and jump into the pool.
The pool was very deep and we almost drowned.The instructor
pulled us out and told us it,s danger to swim like that.
Swimming is fun,but you have to know to do itcorrectly

Answer 1

1.good改为well
2.正确
3.without改为with
4.course改为courses
5.first前加the
6.去掉it
7.Before改为after
8.jump改为jumped
9.almost前加were
10.danger改为dangerous
11.正确