短文改错,注：每处错误及其修改仅限一词,只允许修改10处LasttimeIsawyou,Ididn'tlookquitewell.Asamatterofthefact,Ifeltjustthesameafewmonthago,soIstartgoingtothegym.Also,I'vebeenonadietandnowI'mfe

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短文改错,注：每处错误及其修改仅限一词,只允许修改10处 Last time I saw you,I didn't look quite well.As a matter of the fact,I felt just the same a few month ago,so I start going to the gym.Also,I've been on a diet and now I'm feeling real well.I hope you won't mind if I give you some advices.You should go to the gym and get a personal trainer.You shouldn't take the lift when you go upstairs but you shouldn't take the bus to work.Always having fruit for breakfast and never eat too many fat.I am sure that if you stick this routine for a month,you will surely see the difference.Anyway,let me know what you are getting on.

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Last time I saw you,I didn't look quite well.As a matter of 【去除the】 fact,I felt just the same a few 【month--months】 ago,so I 【start--started 】going to the gym.Also,I've been on a diet and now I'm feeling【real--really】 well.I hope you won't mind if I give you some 【advices--advoce】.You should go to the gym and get a personal trainer.You shouldn't take the lift when you go upstairs 【but---and】 you shouldn't take the bus to work.Always【 having--have】 fruit for breakfast and never eat too【 many --much】fat.I am sure that if you stick【添加to】 this routine for a month,you will surely see the difference.Anyway,let me know 【what--how】 you are getting on.
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