有没有句型以及语法错误这段英语有没有语法以及句型的错误若有错误麻烦改正Hello,everyone.MynameisXXandI’mverygladtoseeyouallhere.I’matypicalLeogirl.Ilikesunflowers,Ilikesunshine,andIlikesun

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有没有句型以及语法错误
这段英语有没有语法以及句型的错误
若有错误 麻烦改正
Hello,everyone.My name is XX and I’m very glad to see you all here.I’m a typical Leo girl.I like sunflowers,I like sunshine,and I like sunflower-like smile that always turns towards the sun and never gives up in tears.I love to smile and to laugh.I’m always brave to pursue my love.I dare to love and hate and always stick at my dream even when I suffer misfortune and pain.
I like a singer,Zeng Yike,because she is very like of us nowadays,including me,who always fight for our dreams.
This is just me,an optimistic,brave and determined Leo girl.Hope you can like me and we can make friends.Thanks.

Answer 1

第一段when I suffer misfortune and pain.
suffer 后加 from忍受...煎熬
第二段including应是included
第三段Hope you can like me and we can make friends.缺主语,应是I hope you can like me and we can make friends.