请诸位高手帮我纠正语法错误Ifanyonestudiesisjustlaughattheotherone,Ithinktiwillgotulose.

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请诸位高手帮我纠正语法错误
If anyone studies is just laugh at the other one,I think ti will go tu lose.

Answer 1

这个句子的本意是用如下的结构表述——
条件状语从句：If anyone studies is just laugh at the other one,
主句：I think It will go tu lose
但是无论是从句还是主句,都存在语法错误.
1、从句中用了两个没有并列手段的谓语动词 studies 和 is,这是一个单元句中的大忌.你想表达的是“一个人学习只是为了嘲笑另一个人”,这个意思可以用两中方式表述——
第一种：
* 把“一个人学习”作为句子的主要结构成分,即 one studies
* 把“嘲笑”作为目的状语,即 in order to（或者 so as to） laugh at ...
整合起来就是 If one studies so as just to laugh at ...
第二种：
* 把“一个人学习”扩充为“一个人学习的目的”,即 one's purpose that he studies（that从句是同位语） 或者 one's purpose to study for（不定式是修饰 purpose 的定语）
* 把“嘲笑”作为不定式作表语,即 is to laugh at ...
整合：If one's purpose to study for is just to laugh at ...
2、主句中的代词 it 指代不明.按照从句的第一中修改,应该把它改为 his purpose；如果是第二种修改,it 就可以直接指代修改过的 purpose.
整句修改如下：
1、If one studies (in order / so as 可以省略不用) just to laugh at other one,I think it will be a dead loss（毫无价值）.
2、If one studies just to laugh at other one,I think he will make an unnecessary effort.
3、If one's purpose to study for is just to laugh at others,I think ...（同上,略）