特急,9月28日.英文生日贺词,觉得我还有哪里需要改正的吗?Todayisnotonlymybirthday,isalsomymother'sholiday.Ispreciselybecauseherpayout,Ionlythenarrivedinthisworld,Ithankher,Iloveher.tomymather:IknowI

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特急,9月28日.英文生日贺词,觉得我还有哪里需要改正的吗?
Today is not only my birthday, is also my mother's holiday. Is precisely because her payout, I only then arrived in this world, I thank her, I love her.
to my mather:
I know I keep you busy ,but you keep me busy,too.While you're busy taking care of me ,I'm busy loving you .Have a wonderful birthday!
to ed:
You often said that your wages are not many.Goes to the supermarket I only to be able to buy the cheap thing, I am with the expensive shampoo in Nanning, but in here, you buy the shampoo which unexpectedly to me one US dollar does not arrive. I am very sad. In is together with you in that many days,I knew that you are He was a good and kind, you were a good person. i and mama Love you, and feels proud for yours work. .
You lead us to here, and has given mother the second time rebirth. Mother is very happy, therefore I am very joyful. All these are you give.
Now I did not know how should repay you. But you believe me Please.one day,I certainly will repay you!
Thanks you, and loves you, my father.
Also thanks this secondary date meeting which everybody helps me to conduct. I felt your passional and hospitable, So i knew am not lonely.
Although I and everybody meet the number of times are not many, but I can actually feel this big family's warmth. Let me think of my grandmother, my uncle and aunt,my sister.
I and mother can become in your this family, we were honored that very much. Thanks everybody.
这有一部分是通过翻译工具的,但我是要在美国人面前念出来的,有些翻译工具翻译出来的他们看不明白.我还需要在哪地方修改吗?比如语法上的.希望懂的人可以帮我看看.修改.谢谢.
这里的28号是中国时间的29号，谢谢了！
Also thank this (secondary date meeting 什么意思？)
是说谢谢这里的人帮我举办这次的生日聚会。
最后再总结谢谢来参加我生日聚会的人。

Answer 1

Today is not only my birthday,but also (mother's day 母亲节）/ my mother's big day (因为生了你所以你妈妈庆祝的日子）/my mother's birthday (我妈妈的生日）.It is she that give life to me and I thank her and love her.
to my mother:
I know I made you busy ,but you keep me busy,too.While you're busy taking care of me ,I'm busy loving you.Have a wonderful birthday!
to ed:
You often say that your wages are not high.When going to the supermarket,I can only buy the cheap things.
Goes to the supermarket I only to be able to buy the cheap thing,I am with the expensive shampoo in Nanning,but in here,you buy the shampoo which unexpectedly to me one US dollar does not arrive 这句话看不懂.
I am very sad.From those past days with you,I know that you are a good person.mom and I love you,we feel proud of your work.
You took us here,and has given mother a chance to begin anew(重新开始）.Mother is very happy,therefore I am in joy.All these owing to you.
Now I don't know how I should repay you.But please believe me,one day,I will certainly repay you!
Thank you,and I love you,father.
Also thank this (secondary date meeting ) which everybody helps me to adapt（适应）.I felt your hospitality,so i know that i'm not alone.
Although we had only met a few times,but I can actually feel this big family's warmth.
Let me think of my grandmother,my uncle and aunt,my sister.
I and mother can become in your this family,we were honored that very much.Thanks everybody.这个也不太通