假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’ve learnt from the notice that you’re looking for an English editor for us school paper. I’m written this letter to apply the position.

I’m Li Hua a Senior Three student in our school. In my view I met your requirements: for one thing I’m willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others; for another I’m good at both English or Fine Arts. I’m either skilled in using computers. I would be glad if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.

I’m looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient.

Answer 1

I’ve learnt from the notice that you’re looking for an English editor for us school paper.

                                                                           our

I’m written this letter to apply∧ the position.   

writing                for

I’m Li Hua a Senior Three student in our school. In my view I met your requirements:

                                                            meet

for one thing I’m willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others; for another

                                                      serving

I’m good at both English or Fine Arts. I’m either skilled in using computers. I would be glad

                      and              also

if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.

I’m looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient.

                          kind                    convenience