下面是一则关于父亲的英语作文,帮我看看有没有什么语法错误,或者有些句子改成更地道的表达?Myfatherisbadatcooking.Oneday,mymotherwasn’tathome.Somyfathercookedforthelunchinthekitchen.Badluck,

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下面是一则关于父亲的英语作文,帮我看看有没有什么语法错误,或者有些句子改成更地道的表达?
My father is bad at cooking .One day,my mother wasn’t at home .So my father cooked for the lunch in the kitchen.Bad luck ,I saw he cooking very fast .He made too much noise .I thought I couldn’t have a good lunch .He always said he cooked as well as my mother .But it wasn’t true .At the table ,I tasted some food .It was too terrible.I thought my father forgot adding salt .He is too careless .He wasted food .Finally we had to go to restaurant for the lunch .I never ever eat he cooked food .

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1He always said he cooked as well as my mother .But it wasn’t true .用现在时,因为用过去式的话,意味着写着文章的时候你爸爸已经不这么说,以及过去不是真的但是现在已经是真的了 2forgot adding salt 改成forgot to add salt,因为用forgot adding salt 表示你爸爸已经加了盐,但是后来他忘记了这件事 3I never ever eat he cooked food 可能楼主想表达再也不会吃他烧的饭,应该用not any longer的局势,而不是I never ever eat he cooked food ...因为完全不通,语法也有问题,用never 和ever的话应该用完成时,但是这样就成了 我从来没有吃过他烧的饭