帮我看一下这句话这样翻译对吗?他的右脚踝只有一点肿,而且更让人惊奇的是,他走路很轻松.所以到现在我们还没去看医生.hisrightanklehasonlyswollenalittlebit,andwhatismoresurpring,hecanwalkat

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帮我看一下这句话这样翻译对吗?
他的右脚踝只有一点肿,而且更让人惊奇的是,他走路很轻松.所以到现在我们还没去看医生.
his right ankle has only swollen a little bit, and what is more surpring, he can walk at ease, so we still have not went to see the doctor.
在上面的翻译当中,英语句子只有一个点号,两个逗号.也就是说and连接两个并列句,so是连接的表结果 的并列句,也就是so后面是and连接的两个并列句的结果.请问这种用法对吗,会不会造成歧义,读的时候以为so后面的句子只是and后面的并列句的结果呢?

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读起来感觉不太顺,试试这样是不是好些：
Only his right ankle was swollen and more surpring is that he can walk very easy,so still now we have not went to hospital.