帮我看看这篇文章啊,有错误请指教啊,Hello,MynameisQiuFang.MyEnglishnameisRobert.Ihavealotofhobbies,suchashandwriting,drawingandsoon.Iaminterestedinmaths,physicsandEnglish.IgotthefirstprizeinHuzhouMathsOlymp

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帮我看看这篇文章啊,有错误请指教啊,
Hello,My name is QiuFang.My English name is Robert.I have a lot of
hobbies,such as handwriting,drawing and so on.I am interested in maths,
physics and English.I got the first prize in Huzhou Maths Olympic
competition.I studied in Changxing Experiment Middle Shool.My school is
so big.There are about 56 classes and about 2800 students in the school.I like the
playground of school best.It is so exciting.Everyday we do exercise there.
We all like sports,like football,basketball,table tennis and volleyball.
My school likes a big gardon.You can see many plants everywhere.It is different
with other schools.My school live is colourful.We had 7 classes everyday.
Our teachers never gave us a lot of homework.They gave us more time to do something
we liked.I love my school very much.

Answer 1

说了半天,没说你是哪国哪省的啊
My school is so big.换成It's a very big school.
2800 students in the school换成2800 students in it
还有个逻辑错误,操场有什么可爱的,又有什么可exciting的?要说就说爱运动就完了.
like football中的like去掉
My school likes a big gardon换成My school is like a big garden
You can see many plants everywhere换成There are plants everywhere
different with换成different from