谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文(初一作文）有没有错误,再教教我怎么改?求指导今晚6点前要~MyFavoriteAnimalThisisJodie.Heistenyeasold.Heisaleopard.They’remyfavoriteanimal.Theanimalofthecatfamily,withyel

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谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文(初一作文）有没有错误,再教教我怎么改?求指导 今晚6点前要~
My Favorite Animal
This is Jodie.He is ten yeas old.He is a leopard.They’re my favorite animal.The animal of the cat family,with yellow fur and black spots.They're come from Afica.He likes to eat meats very much.
He can run fast,so leople think he is "dash champion".Some people don't like them,because they're very scary.But I like them best,because they're very cool and noble.
Do you like them?What animal do you like?

Answer 1

they're 错了,应该用第三人称单数,it is my favourite animal.they are come from 应该改成,it comes from Afica .meat 是不可数名词,不能加s .
(全文的单复数很混乱,不知道你想说一个的还是想说一类的.后面的你自己看看吧）