请帮我看看这篇英文作文有没有错的和需要改进的地方,批改一下,感激不尽.谢谢了.TheWaterPollutionInMyHometownIwasborninJiangyang.Hereismyhometown.Inthepast,hereisavillage.Thereareonlysmallhousesfield

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请帮我看看这篇英文作文有没有错的和需要改进的地方,批改一下,感激不尽.谢谢了.
The Water Pollution In My Hometown
I was born in Jiangyang.Here is my hometown.In the past,here is a village.There are only small houses field and beautiful environment.With the rapid development. The geat changes have taken place in my hometown .But so many problems also come in the train of it.The most serrious problems is water pollution.Many chemical factori produces terreble water.andponr it in the river.And so many people throw litter aroundand waste water.Because df these,the water what can drink has become less and less.The most fish in the river have gone death.However,not all people know water is a very important thing of everyone.At the end,I hope the poeple all over the world can save the water.

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In the past,here is a village.--------Jiangyang used to be a village.
With the rapid development.-------缺少主语 别告诉我你是直接翻译的.
But so many problems also come in the train of it.-------一般But,and之类的词不开头,而且 in the train of it是什么东西-.-
The most serrious problems is water pollution.Many chemical factori produces terreble water.------serious拼错了,1个问题不用加"s",factory
.andponr it in the river------ pour
aroundand------SPACE between d&a
Because df these-----of
the water what can drink has----------that
The most fish in the river have gone death.-------Most of the fish in the river died.
However,not all people know water is a very important thing of everyone.-----删了吧 我都懒得改了
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