英语邮件,以下是我回复老外的一封邮件,请问这样子表达有问题吗,可以怎样修改啊,DearBuntyVerygladtoreceiveyourenquiry,attachmentisthequotationforHL-8380,pleasereferit,thepricecoulddependonyouorder'squa

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英语邮件,以下是我回复老外的一封邮件,请问这样子表达有问题吗,可以怎样修改啊,
Dear Bunty
Very glad to receive your enquiry,attachment is the quotation for HL-8380,please refer it,the price could depend on you order's quantity,be kindly let me know you require,we can meet it.if you are interested,we can make further communication about that.

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在你的基础上帮你润色一下I’m very glad to receive your enquiry. The attachment is the quotation for HL-8380. Please refer it. The price will depend on your order's quantity. Make me know your requirements kindly. If you are interested. we can meet each other and make further communication about it.希望能对你有帮助,你的标点符号用错的太多,不能不写句号.