英语高手麻烦来改下错,IntheearlytwentiethCentury,intheinfluenceofIrishRenaissanceandIbsenexperimentaldrama,representedbyGeorgeBernardShawofsocialproblemdrama,reachedthesecondsummittothehistoryofBritishdrama.However

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英语高手麻烦来改下错,
In the early twentieth Century,in theinfluence of Irish Renaissance and Ibsen experimental drama,represented byGeorge Bernard Shaw of social problem drama,reached the second summit to thehistory of British drama.However,soon afterward,drama has been marginalizedagain.After the Second World War,people carry out a profound reflection onthe war,at the same time,they are thoroughly despair to the present world.Inthis background,the playwright Samuel Beckett’s theatre of the absurd achievesthe third and the last summit of British drama history.Also,this genre is stillnot last long,fading fast in the UK.
题下有一大段空白，估计是整篇都要改。

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In the early twentieth Century,UNDER the influence of THE Irish Renaissance and Ibsen experimental drama,represented by George Bernard Shaw of social problem drama,reached the second summit IN the history of British drama.However,soon afterward,drama has been marginalized again.After the Second World War,people CARRIED a profound reflection on the war; at the same time,they WERE thoroughly despair to the present world.In this background,the playwright Samuel Beckett’s theatre of the absurd ACHIEVED the third and the last summit of British drama history.Also,this genre STILL DID NOT last long,HAS FADED fast in the UK.
我就看出就这么几个了 别人补吧
reached the second summit IN the history of British drama.
这句话我想整个改掉
british drama has reached the second summit in history
they WERE thoroughly despair to the present world
这个也是
they held much despair towards the their era
Also,this genre STILL DID NOT last long,HAS FADED fast in the UK.
还有这个
Although,this genre still did not last long and has quickly faded in the UK history.
不知道让改词语呢 还是句子也可以改