英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：

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英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

    The winter holiday is coming which makes me very exciting. I have been looking forward to relax myself and I’d like to go fishing climb high mountain and ride my bicycle. I think I can play football or play the chess with my father as well. How a wonderful time I will have during the winter holiday! But my father has differently opinions. He doesn’t want me to go out. He’s afraid that I’ll be knocked down a truck fall into rivers fall off a tree or fight with other. What’s worse he’s afraid I will get lost. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. I need freedom but I will try to persuade my father.

Answer 1

第一句： exciting 改 excited

第二句： relax 改 relaxing; mountain
改 mountains

第三句：去掉 the

第四句： How 改 What

第五句： differently 改 different

第七句： a 前加 by; other 改 others

第九句 :  keeping 改 kept

第十句： but 改 and