英语作文评析,三级水平,正文如下,请指出错误,评改有道理的追加,DearJack,Iknowyou’rearrivingnextSunday,letmetellthewaytomyhouse.Whenyougooutofairport,youcanseeLongStreet.GoalongLongStreetandturnatA

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英语作文评析,三级水平,正文如下,请指出错误,评改有道理的追加,
Dear Jack,
I know you’re arriving next Sunday,let me tell the way to my house.
When you go out of airport,you can see Long Street.Go along Long Street and turn at Apple School.Then you’re on the First Street.Go along First Street and across New Street.Then you can see my house on the right of the rode.
Let’s have a good time!
I hope you have a good trip!
Yours,
Wang Lei

Answer 1

you’re arriving 改成you will arrive；
let me tell 后面加you；
of和airport之间加the；
Long Street前加the；
Let’s have a good time!删去