请老师帮忙改一下作文,期待见证老师的文采假如你是大学一年级新生李华,开学之初,英语老师MsLi希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议,请根据要点写一封信1.对英语学习的认识2

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请老师帮忙改一下作文,期待见证老师的文采
假如你是大学一年级新生李华,开学之初,英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议,请根据要点写一封信
1.对英语学习的认识
2.自己目前的英语水平
3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题
4.对英语教学的两点建议
Dear Ms Li,
I'm ver happy to have you as our English teacher.(已给出）
English,no doubt,is an imparative subject as a language for our students.In order to communicate with other countrys' people as better as possible,we have no choice but to enhance our English skill.
I practice English every day,loving it.And it gradually be the compont of my life.But my English is not very well as my English spoken and grammer is terrible.Therefore,I hope teacher will give me some useful advice.In addition,an effective way,I think,is to teach English in a scientific way.For example,watching America movie will promote students' interest in English.And if teacher teach students in English,our hearings will be better.Thank you!
Looking for your reply.
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Ms Li,
I'm ver happy to have you as our English teacher.(已给出）
English,no doubt,is an imparative subject as a language for our students.In order to communicate with *people of other *countries'* as well as possible,we have no choice but to enhance our English *skills*.
I practice English every day,*and I love it very much*.And it *is* gradually *a part*of my *daily*life.But my *written* English is not *as* well as my spoken English and *my**grammar* is terrible.Therefore,I hope *my* teacher will give me some useful advice.In addition,*one of* effective *ways* * for* *teachers*,I think,is to teach English in a scientific way.For example,watching America *movies* will promote students' interest in English.And if *teachers* teach students in English *in class*,our *hearing* will *become* better.Thank you!
Looking *forward to* your reply.
Li Hua
感觉您提供的两个作文不像是同一个人写的呢?